I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Arnicka Another quality blog post. I particularly liked the video - it's a nice change from just text and photos. What a great idea with the milk container candle holder - it would make the candle more visible from a distance (everything seems to be at a distance these days). Why don't you try making a video with step by step instructions on how to make something - maybe a baking project or a craft idea using recycled materials. - Mr Mitchell
Hey Arnicka I really like your Poppys that look amazing. I like how you made a video of how you made the Poppys along with the photos too. But maybe you could say something else instead of just saying one sentence in your blog post. But although your Poppys look amazing :)
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Hi Arnicka
ReplyDeleteAnother quality blog post. I particularly liked the video - it's a nice change from just text and photos. What a great idea with the milk container candle holder - it would make the candle more visible from a distance (everything seems to be at a distance these days).
Why don't you try making a video with step by step instructions on how to make something - maybe a baking project or a craft idea using recycled materials.
- Mr Mitchell
Hi Arnicka i like your Poppys
ReplyDeleteHey Arnicka
ReplyDeleteI really like your Poppys that look amazing. I like how you made a video of how you made the Poppys along with the photos too. But maybe you could say something else instead of just saying one sentence in your blog post. But although your Poppys look amazing :)