The first time on the moon

For literacy we have been writing about  the moon landing of Buzz Aldrin and Neil Armstrong it was hard to write and it was easy to edit

The first time on the moon

“5”4”3”2”1” liftoff I look around the space rocket I see all these buttons and this big red one I eyed it up about to push the big red one. I stopped myself.I was looking out the tiny widow the walky talky said “it will take 3 Days to get to the moon”. I was getting hungry I look around I  smelt my mum’s homemade cookies. In my bag they are chocolate chip ones...10 hours later.

I wake up I look around I’m terrified I forget that I was going to the moon.I said to myself “I’m doing this I am one day down only 2 more days to go”. I’m really bored there is nothing to do I'm just lying in my sleeping bag.My room mate Nirvana she brought a pack of cards and a board game.We decided to play cards we played last card. I won the game we started to play the board game guess who Nirvana won. 15 hours later.

“We have land I repeat we have landed”we wore screaming we have landed.we opened the door carefully, not knowing what was on the moon there was nothing waiting at the door.we walked out and saw nothing that was on the moon we looked around 2 hours later.The walky talky said “put the NZ flag down I repeat put the NZ flag down then return to the space rocket”. We closed the door and listened to the countdown 3 days later.

We land on earth we got out of the rocket. There are all these people and my  family I go there and give them a hug.Nirvana did the same.The couch said good job you did it I am proud of yous girls.Im happy to be home. 

By Arnicka