I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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nice work maybe next time you can fix up the last page i liked the part when argues over who get to play
ReplyDeletehi Arnicka nice work i like the would you rather have many friends but not close friends but maybe next time you can fix up your last page.
ReplyDeleteHi arnicka,
ReplyDeleteI love your work,
One time I did a mistake like you.
maybe next time you make sure your text is the same colour.