I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Today i finished off my week 3 planing for my fantasy writing story. My story is going to be about a wizard who gets trapped in a magic forest and he has to work with a witch so he can get out if the forest. Here is a picture of my characters.
Hi Arnicka I like the sound of your brief plot summary and I'm looking forward to seeing how your story pans out. The pictures of your characters are very good and help me to get a feel for their personalities. Have you thought about turning your story into a picture book and/or using Screencastify to make an audio book with pictures? - Mr Mitchell
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Hi Arnicka
ReplyDeleteI like the sound of your brief plot summary and I'm looking forward to seeing how your story pans out. The pictures of your characters are very good and help me to get a feel for their personalities.
Have you thought about turning your story into a picture book and/or using Screencastify to make an audio book with pictures?
- Mr Mitchell